okay,critique time. the first thing i noticed was the hands. seriously. they're yaoi hands. and the fingers are very oddly shaped.some are pointy while some are rounded.what the hell. sollux's horns are.....they look like they're taped to his hair. and his knee looks VERY awkward. the bathtub must be really shallow,too.
now,onto gamzee. his facepaint. where is it. his horns....also look taped to his hair. and his HAIR looks like someone either cut it awkwardly or bashed his head in with a pipe. his back seems somewhat strained.
and the thing i DO like about this piece is the faces. i really like their little seductive smirks.